Socially and environmentally responsible investing is on the rise: last year in the United States, over $2 trillion was invested in funds that screen companies according to a variety of criteria such as adherence to labor standards, protection of the environment, and observance of human rights.
according to a variety of criteria such as
according to a variety of such criteria, as by
according to such a variety of criteria as by
in accordance with such a variety of criteria as
in accordance with a variety of criteria, such as by
题目分析:
本题主要的矛盾点就在于两个词选取,即,according to和in accordance with。这两个短语虽然经常可以互换,但是意思上还是有些许不同的,所以我们在使用这些短语时应多加小心。“According to…”通常在你要重述你从某人那儿听到的内容、你听说的内容或者在某处读到的内容时使用。这个短语通常用于新闻报道。例如:
According to the clerk we spoke to when we telephoned the supervisory authority this morning, the application was filed last week.
这个短语可以用于引入可能并不真实的信息:
According to the state news agency, the number of demonstrators did not exceed 1,000. However, the organisers of the protest say there were at least 100,000 people on the march.
这个短语也可以用于引入传闻:
According to Annabel, Tom wants to dump Sarah because he really fancies Emma.
“In accordance with…”用于更为正式的情景,引入依据内容。在法律文本中,这个短语用于说明与法律或合同一致的内容。这个短语不得用于引入可能并不真实的信息。
简而言之,如果根据的是一般的信息而非法律规定等极为正式的信息,用according to;如果根据的是法律规定等极为正式的信息,用in accordance with。
选项分析:
A选项:Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。
B选项:according to已经是介词了,所以在such as身后不必要再添加一个介词by,这样会造成语法错误,即,funds screen companies according to by A。
C选项:本选项错误同(B)。
D选项:由于本题描述的是“根据”某些特点来评判公司,所以这些内容显然不是法律条文,应该将in accordance with改为according to。
E选项:本选项兼具本题中所有的错误。
according to用于不那么正式的,甚至存在虚假成分的话,新闻,引用,某些评判标准
而in accordance with用于正式场合,一般会和法律条文,code,creed这种原则性较强的东西一起使用
我心想IPS难道还不正式吗...... 果断选D
be invested in。。和by没有什么关系,怎么选了by。。
the differentiating factor between (a) and (d) is the placement of the "such" modifier. "such" should be placed AS CLOSE AS POSSIBLE to the NOUN THAT IS EMPHASIZED in context. (例如in this problem, "such as" is describing the CRITERIA, not the variety.)
“这里such的位置就很好。 a variety of是各种各样的意思,你觉得such all kinds of fruits as apple, pear, and banana通顺吗?肯定不好啊,所以D就不好。一般都是说all kinds of fruits such as...,所以就选A。”
mark
根据的是一般的信息而非法律规定等极为正式的信息,用according to;如果根据的是法律规定等极为正式的信息,用in accordance with。介词according to和介词by同用造成语法错误
“According to…”通常在你要重述你从某人那儿听到的内容、你听说的内容或者在某处读到的内容时使用。这个短语通常用于新闻报道。“In accordance with…”用于更为正式的情景,引入依据内容。在法律文本中,这个短语用于说明与法律或合同一致的内容。这个短语不得用于引入可能并不真实的信息。
A选项according to前面是不是应该有一个逗号阿...
screen 筛选
笔记:简而言之,如果根据的是一般的信息而非法律规定等极为正式的信息,用according to;如果根据的是法律规定等极为正式的信息,用in accordance with。
所以D后面的such a … as用于举例是否正确?
引用:the differentiating factor between (a) and (d) is the placement of the "such" modifier.
"such" should be placed AS CLOSE AS POSSIBLE to the NOUN THAT IS EMPHASIZED in context.
here are two examples to illustrate:
* i've never seen another store with such a variety of beverages as these ones.
--> the VARIETY is the point; i've never seen a store with this many different beverages.
criteria指的是标准、规则和条件等,这些词并不是具有法律意义的条文,所以不用in accordance with
一般的信息而非法律规定等极为正式的信息,用according to;如果根据的是法律规定等极为正式的信息,用in accordance with。
screen 检查
In accordance with is used to indicate compliance 与。。。一直,秉承,按照
According to is used to attribute information to a source
据说D是正确答案
http://www.beatthegmat.com/according-vs-in-accordance-such-as-vs-such-x-as-t27203.html#359093
over $2 trillion was invested in funds that screen companies according to a ...
that可以做according 的逻辑主语
但是D的问题在于,such到底在这里强调了criteria的内容,还是强调了variety的内容
这题的题眼是不是as 后面不要出现by, 之后再AD 中间选择。
screen 做动词,表示:筛选、检查的意思