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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.
were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of
In C, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians。
that不可以作非限制定语从句引导词，所以that的出现导致逗号前的东东成了插入语，that修饰插入语前面的东东。
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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe(subject)
whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style（定语从句中的三个主语。views此处是名词不是动词） influenced on generations of bluegrass artists.（定语从句）
also inspired many musicians（谓语和宾语）
including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.（伴随状语）
A选项：'were influential on' is wordy而且不合语法；
B选项：并列谓语：influenced 和 inspired
C选项：'was influential to' and 'different...in comparison to 都是wordy的
D选项：'was influential to' and 'when compared to 都是wordy的, the music of whom 是cumbersome
E选项：were an influence on 是wordy 和不合语法，was also an inspiration to 和 was significantly different from不清楚
A musician is an inspiration是错误的
我觉得a要看语义啊 这里说这个人是inspiration肯定是语音不对的呀
1.根据从句中主语为复数（whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style），排除CD，主谓不一致；
2.根据that不能引导非限制性定语从句，排除A；
3.根据未划线部分his own所有格，排除E，that of his own，即the music of his own music，冗余；
以上均为绝对性错误，感觉要想选对还是有些费时间...不知是否存在更优解题策略？
老师"repertory, views and vocal style"由于vocal style是单数所以就近原则排除 A E里的were可以吗
whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style
A and B 算是复数，所以后接was应该是不对的？
his own=his music=that of him
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his own已经是所有格了。
B中的including修饰的是musicians，做定语成分，但是我觉得不需要这个逗号啊，逗号不应该是接伴随状语，这不会有歧义吗
a were influential ！！ influential！！！！
e were an influence on ！！！
理解成了 be 被。。影响，没细看选项，就看了be动词
奇怪，b的谓语动词是什么？？主句没有谓语啊，全是从句啊
是influence啊 “影响了...."
还有inspire
influenced是whose引导的定语从句的谓语，不是主句的谓语，只能将inspired理解成主句的谓语
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E that of = music of, 后面应该加主格。his own=his music，本质是music。 that of his own=music of his music，语义错误。
C D influential和inspirational不如动词形式简洁influenced inspired
his own是所有格，意思即是his music。而nfluenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians和were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration在意思上都表达正确，但GMAT中动词比动作性名词 (action noun) 更能表达句子的意思，是更加适合的选择。正确答案是B。
that of his own是错的。that of不能加所有格
是his own已经是所有歌了吧 参考你楼下的
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his own 已经是所有格，不能再加that of
eg. his apple is bigger than mine. 而不是 than that of mine
人对音乐家们的影响，先用including介词表包含排除acd，be比较被动没有主动好，排除e
that做非限制性定语从句结构错误
请问，different和in comparison to，compared to是不可以一起用么？原因是什么呢？曼哈顿提到："Differed when compared to" is redundant - and it's an incorrect interpretation (literally, it means that the music was only 'different' when someone was actively comparing it to some other music).但我觉得这个解释也没说明什么问题啊，不就是要和其他music比较么？求老师解答~谢谢！
老师，E选项是that of出问题了吗？找不到that具体指代什么……
我理解的是were an influence 和was also an inspiration 这两者系动词应该是一致的，应该是用 were
不是的
were的主语是repertory and vocal style。was的主语是Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe。
主谓是一致的
哦哦哦！好呢……
是有问题的。因为his own已经是所有格了，表示“他自己的”，两个音乐相比较。再加that of就赘余了。
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