Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained almost unknown outside his native Denmark.
Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which have been some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, while he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales, which, while among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies remain
Even as Hans Christian Andersen's fairy tales have been among the most frequently translated works in literary history, still his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
Unlike the fairy tales written by Hans Christian Andersen, which are some of the most frequently translated works in literary history, he wrote plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, which remained
Although Hans Christian Andersen wrote fairy tales that are among the most frequently translated works in literary history, his plays, novels, poems, and travel books, as well as several autobiographies, remain
here's an example: even as his income has increased, joe has continued to feel less and less satisfied with his life
C even as 没有转折的意思,表示“正巧在。。。时候”
但是仔细看A,觉得A的问题更大,which的修饰一直都是一个很容易引起歧义的地方,A中的which仿佛只修饰了autobiographies
which remained就近修饰名词,但无法修饰一组名词。
时态值得商榷。
A:第二个which指代错误,不能指代前面一整串的名词,而只能指代一个。
审题时一定要从大局观去分析句子每个部分的作用,以及他们相互是怎样联系的。
* second, they should be the present tense, since the sentence is stating facts that are statistical truths.
1.fairy tales后用that限定性定从更好
2.最……之一 用among the most 不用some of the most
3.区分 although,even as(at the same time),while
which remained 一般过去时只表示过去在丹麦以外的地方没有名,现在怎么样不知道,应该用一般现在时
且which修饰前面一堆名词还是紧挨的autobiography 不清晰。
while转折前后是:他写了童话,while他写了小说等,转折关系不强烈,没有although好
B。which从句主谓宾完整,which不作任何成分,错
C。even as 正当...时 表同时发生 前后时态都不一致,且意思和still有点重复