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Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.
they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again
in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again
with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again
a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again
题目分析：
本题较长，但是考点相对明显，不算是很难的考题。
选项分析：
A选项：Correct. 本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。代词they指代sales of wines，and particularly of red wine中去掉and也是对的（and可放在插入语前，不影响逻辑）。
B选项：ing短语growing again需改为不定式短语to grow again，这点考查了不定式和ing的区别，本题中的begin属于约束力较强的情况。在习语上，begin to do和begin doing都是常见的，并且经常被认为相等。但其实，两者有明显的使用区别。begin doing一般是从第三方的角度描述doing这一事件，并不强调这件事的始发时间点，例如：
In 1990, Jack began playing the guitar.
该例句表明，杰克在1990年开始了弹吉他，不强调究竟是在1990年的哪个时间点开始弹的，只是一种客观的描述。又例如：
After scoring 760 in GMAT, Jack began to applicate his dream school.
该例句表明，在考了760分后，杰克开始申请他最想去的学校了，强调了在某个时间点后，杰克开始做申请这件事。
用之于本题，显然“酒的销量上升”是在“1991年的报告”这个时间点后发生的一个事件，因此应该用begin to do。GMAT考试非常习惯考查这些甚至连美国人都不太清楚的“语法”，毕竟，这是一个曾经只设计给美国本土人的考试。
另外，particularly red wine是同位语，应和a moderate alcohol同等地位，最理想的情况是安放在alcohol身后，而不是放在consumption身后（当然，这不算是绝对错误）
C选项：提取本选项的主干则有：moderate alcohol consumption caused them to begin to grow again.
在逻辑上，不能是moderate alcohol consumption引起销量上升，应该是1991年的报告引起销量的上升。
D选项：本选项错误同选项(B)。with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption是独立主格结构，没有问题。
E选项：提取本选项的主干则有：a reduced risk of heart disease started them to begin growing again.
start主语错误同理于选项(C)。
另外，ing短语growing again需改为不定式短语to grow again错误同选项(B)。
A 正确 link with alcohol 和red wine平行
B with a moderate alcohol consumption, （particularly） red wine中red wine是名词做同位语修饰consumption，错误
C consumption和red wine平行 错误 应该和红酒消耗量平行
D 同B
E red wine和in the report平行。red wine和consumption应该都在报告中
anything/anyone/anywhere in particular
不能说 in particular anything/anyone/anywhere in particular
在习语上，begin to do和begin doing都是常见的，并且经常被认为相等。但其实，两者有明显的使用区别。begin doing一般是从第三方的角度描述doing这一事件，并不强调这件事的始发时间点，例如：
In 1990, Jack began playing the guitar.
该例句表明，杰克在1990年开始了弹吉他，不强调究竟是在1990年的哪个时间点开始弹的，只是一种客观的描述。又例如：
After scoring 760 in GMAT, Jack began to applicate his dream school.
该例句表明，在考了760分后，杰克开始申请他最想去的学校了，强调了在某个时间点后，杰克开始做申请这件事。
link A with B;
particularly C作插入语
A. 同位语前的and起到强调语气的作用
GWD24-Q23: Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether the Earth would warm and by how much, but climatologists have indicated all along that the most obvious effects, and those that would have the largest impact on people, would be extremes of temperature, precipitation, and storminess.
毛毛carina的类比：我认为A选项是这样一个结构，换句中文举例：最大那个苹果，同时也是最红的那个苹果，是我想吃的。主句是最大那个苹果是我想吃的，中间成分，那么刚刚好它也是最红的。所以需要有and，也就是说和用非限定性定从语气上有区别。
ing短语growing again需改为不定式短语to grow again，
A 的“and particularly of red wine” 同位语有时会加and (非常少)
这道题提了个醒 不要盲目的排除and结构 一定还是要以句意为主
B：补充 begin to do sth
Ron ：if you're going to use an appositive modifier (comma + NOUN), then the appositive modifier must actually describe what is to the left of the comma.
this doesn't happen here: "(particularly) red wine" is not an example of "alcohol consumption". note that it's an example of alcohol itself, but not an example of alcohol consumption.
"in particular red wine" doesn't modify anything.
this construction follows alcohol consumption -- in which "alcohol" is an adjective, not a noun -- rather than just alcohol. red wine is not a type of alcohol consumption, so this modifier isn't workable.
the "with..." modifier suggests that wine sales themselves have experienced a reduced risk of heart disease.
if you're going to use an appositive modifier (basically, comma + NOUN), then the appositive modifier must actually describe what is to the left of the comma.
this doesn't happen here: "(particularly) red wine" is not an example of "alcohol consumption". note that it's an example of alcohol itself, but not an example of alcohol consumption.
A 正确 link with alcohol 和red wine平行
B with a moderate alcohol consumption, （particularly） red wine中red wine是名词做同位语修饰consumption，错误
C consumption和red wine平行 错误 应该和红酒消耗量平行
D 同B
E red wine和in the report平行。red wine和consumption应该都在报告中
没看出link with 来
BCDE明显很不通顺
DE中的，in particular red wine这个插入语 应该也有问题吧？
A.moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine
B.with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine
C.moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine
这三个一对比很明显A胜出，两个 CONSUMPTION OF 并列
B是red wine做同位语，按理左边应该是alcohol而不是alcohol cosumption
C是 of red wine 显然and左边没有和其对应的成分
这道错了不止一次，标记一下。
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-374972-1-1.html
B选项是不是也有they作为代词，离被指代对象太远的问题？
代词的指代对象需要指一个逻辑上合理的名词，和远近无关哟。
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老师，a和b我有这样的一个顾虑：after the 1991 reported that。我感觉这样发出report的动作的是1991，然后我就直接排除了这个选项了。。。请老师指点指点，多谢！
report是名词，that是修饰它的定从
厉害了我的哥！
是我瞎了。。。谢谢！
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噢是的，解析没看清楚。。