Whereas the use of synthetic fertilizers has greatly expanded agricultural productivity in many parts of the world, an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers may accelerate soil structure deterioration and soil erosion.
an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
an increase in their use can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, and if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, it
if these fertilizers are used increasingly, they can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, and if used as substitutions for more traditional fertilizers, they
the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems such as water pollution, while if substituted for more traditional fertilizers, this substitution
the increased usage of these fertilizers can create serious environmental problems like water pollution, while their substitution for more traditional fertilizers
while表转折,原句并无转折之意,排除D
我错选C,还是同一个逻辑思维漏洞,不是fertilizer本身导致环境问题,而是 an increase usage of fertilizer,扭曲原意。同时and后的they指代不清.
(B) 用like举例错误,应该用such as;it指代对象不清楚。
(C) 第一个they指代fertilizers作creat serious environmental problems的主语不符合逻辑及
,应该是fertilizers的增长引起环境问题,而不是fertilizers本身;第二个they指代对象不清楚。
(D) if substituted…, this substitution…的表达方式啰嗦不简洁;while表达了转折的含义,而
(E) 用like举例错误,应该用such as;while表达了转折的含义而原句中由and连接并列的句子,并 没有此含义。
synthetic fertilizers的使用增加会导致严重的环境问题,同时用他们来代替传统的fertilizer也会导致xx问题。
主要是语意问题吧,后面不应该用转折的语气。
D: substituted 形容 fertilizers,然后后面是this substitution,错误E: 不能用like,要用such as
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因为发出 create serious environmental problems这个动作的应该是“使用的上升”,而不是 fertilizers(they)。登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论
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应该是increased usage才能create啊?
是“对于某些东西的使用的上升”导致了环境污染嘛~真正产生环境污染的原因是“上升”,而不是使用,因为正常的使用是不会造成污染的。
同错选了E。但是increase的完整表达也是increase in use of sth.那为什么不能表达成increased usage呢?正常的usage是不会,但increased usage会,逻辑上说不通么?
an increase in their use的核心词是increase, 也就是herl所说的上升导致环境污染。increased usage的核心词是usage,就变成了使用造成了污染
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这个解开了我的疑惑,谢了!
还是很疑惑,increaser usage是增加的使用量导致污染,好像也make sense登录 或 注册 后可以参加讨论