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The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
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choice a, which定语从句中先行词是$950 million, 逻辑错误
choice b,c:It doesn't make sense to say that $950 million is part of a deal that will make the company the largest manufacturer. The purchase of the rival company is part of a deal, but the price itself is not
choice d, to make作为目的状语，make的发出者是computer company，公司不能够使公司成为第一，而应该是deal
As做介词，修饰前句动词purchase
it will， 自然后面也跟将来时 will make
It purchases a company as a part of deal, as+宾语作状语修饰主句谓语动词purchase，意为将购买公司这件事情作为交易的一部分。
介宾短语不同于伴随状语，不需要以主句主语为逻辑主语。
part of/a part of：
都表示部分，part of侧重不肯分割的部分及占比较大的部分，a part of侧重指较小部分 Right：Sleep is part of a person's daily activity cycle. Right：Our world is but a small part of the cosmos.
that will make 一般将来时的语境
购买行为会使它成为最大生产商，不是950 公司to make it 重复，错误，应该是deal会make it
核心词是purchase 不是950
It doesn't make sense to say that $950 million is part of a deal that will make the company the largest manufacturer. The purchase of the rival company is part of a deal, but the price itself is not.
鉴于我无法分清楚哪个是抽象的那个是具体的
bc时态均错，b用了一般现在，c ing 表示和前一句时态是一致，那就是现在完成
应该使用一般将来时
It doesn't make sense to say that $950 million is part of a deal that will make the company the largest manufacturer. The purchase of the rival company is part of a deal, but the price itself is not.
C中用making的话是做独立主格，但是表明这件事情伴随主句的事情已经发生了，可是主句的事情是将来时，还未发生，那伴随的事件起码在将来才会发生，用making不好。
D中to make表示the corporation will purchase sth as a part of deal to make【 it】 the largest manufacture, 可是原文中是说这个交易会使公司成为最大的，原文在这点上并没有逻辑错误，应该尊重原文，其次，如果C要对，起码把it 改成 itself才更正确。
E更尊重原文意思。
A.B.C同位语所以必须紧跟先行词，其前面都是million, 所以排除ABC, D中TO DEAL的逻辑主语是the company, 所以不对，应该选E.
D:to make是状语，逻辑主语是company, “公司让自己成为最大”语意错误
COMMA + ABSTRACT NOUN is allowed to stand for the ENTIRE IDEA OF THE PRECEDING CLAUSE.
COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN usually stands for the DIRECTLY PRECEDING NOUN.
D和E比错在哪里？是时态的区别吗？
状语和定语的区别
to表达购买的目的
that will…表明这个deal的特点
为什么不能选deal的目的是把电脑公司变成最大的制造商？
使公司成为no.1的是这个deal；而这里的状语“to make”的逻辑主语是公司，并不是公司使自己成为了no.1
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D和E比错在哪里？
同位语修饰整个句子是必须是抽象名词，是具象名词时只能修饰前一个名词
未来的事情 需要用 will
C making表示进行
D要改的话应该是to make itself ....而不是it
①(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make（which修饰million 错）
(B) million, a part of a deal that makes（a part修饰million 错）
(C) million, part of a deal making（part修饰million 错）
②DE.statement想表达的意思是这个deal 使得这个公司成为最大的制造商，但是D表达的意思是这个公司自己使自己自己成为最大的制造商，注意to make的主语