The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
choice b,c:It doesn't make sense to say that $950 million is part of a deal that will make the company the largest manufacturer. The purchase of the rival company is part of a deal, but the price itself is not
choice d, to make作为目的状语,make的发出者是computer company,公司不能够使公司成为第一,而应该是deal
it will, 自然后面也跟将来时 will make
介宾短语不同于伴随状语,不需要以主句主语为逻辑主语。
都表示部分,part of侧重不肯分割的部分及占比较大的部分,a part of侧重指较小部分 Right:Sleep is part of a person's daily activity cycle. Right:Our world is but a small part of the cosmos.
bc时态均错,b用了一般现在,c ing 表示和前一句时态是一致,那就是现在完成
应该使用一般将来时
D中to make表示the corporation will purchase sth as a part of deal to make【 it】 the largest manufacture, 可是原文中是说这个交易会使公司成为最大的,原文在这点上并没有逻辑错误,应该尊重原文,其次,如果C要对,起码把it 改成 itself才更正确。
E更尊重原文意思。
COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN usually stands for the DIRECTLY PRECEDING NOUN.
状语和定语的区别to表达购买的目的
that will…表明这个deal的特点
为什么不能选deal的目的是把电脑公司变成最大的制造商?
使公司成为no.1的是这个deal;而这里的状语“to make”的逻辑主语是公司,并不是公司使自己成为了no.1
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C making表示进行
(B) million, a part of a deal that makes(a part修饰million 错)
(C) million, part of a deal making(part修饰million 错)
②DE.statement想表达的意思是这个deal 使得这个公司成为最大的制造商,但是D表达的意思是这个公司自己使自己自己成为最大的制造商,注意to make的主语