The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
million, which is part of a deal that will make
million, a part of a deal that makes
million, part of a deal making
million as a part of a deal to make
million as part of a deal that will make
B选项:冠词a多余;时态应该一般将来时;
C选项:making并无法指出将来时态;
D选项:改变语义了,文章意思是XX将变成。。。而不是XX的目的是。。。;a 多余;
E.g., if you write My teenage daughter wears skirts over leggings, exemplifying a trend sweeping the nation, you're implying that the trend is already "sweeping the nation" right now. If my daughter's actions start the trend, this sentence isn't accurate.
COMMA + CONCRETE NOUN usually stands for the DIRECTLY PRECEDING NOUN.
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同位语用法注意!
有点像这个,note as 啥➕that 从句
E 变成公司使公司变成 所以应该用make itself
part of a deal
Ron 说是concrete
(D) million as a part of a deal to make (to make的主语是the company,导致the company will make it the largest xxx, 那么这里对自己的动作需要用到反身代词itself而不是it,e.g. 我们不能说I made me happy. 要说I made myself happy.)
(B) million, a part of a deal that makes (同位语,ok,同位语must tag the immediately preceding noun,所以B/C错误一样,同位语错误同位$950 million;因为deal还不存在,只能用that will make而不能用makes)