平行触发语as much…as…
题目释义: Sales declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked A, …,with B.
考点:
代词指代(reference)、平行结构(parallelism)、逻辑意思(Logical predication)
1. link…with/to…固定搭配
2. 代词若离其所指代对象太远,则会造成指代不清的情况。
【Sales】 of wines declined in the late 1980s, but 【they】began to grow again after the 1991 report [that linked moderate consumption of alcohol(, and particularly of red wine, )with a reduced risk of heart disease]
葡萄酒的【销量】在 1980 年代后期有所下降,但【销量】又开始增长,在 1991 年的报告将适度饮酒(,尤其是红酒)与降低患心脏病的风险联系起来后
A. (√)
They是完全指代,指代sales of wines; and particularly of red wine中去掉and也是对的(and可放在插入语前,不影响逻辑);
begin to do或begin doing都正确;
in particular在本题不如particularly有效,因为介词太多句式会复杂。
错误选项分析:
B.【Sales】 of wines declined in the late 1980s, but after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine(少了consumption),【they 代词太远】 began growing again (×)
red wine与alcohol consumption概念不同,不能同位修饰,应该在red wine后面也补上consumption;
they 离其所指代的sales太远,使得句子理解起来不清晰, awkward;
link A with B, A和B谁在前并不要紧。
C.【Sales】 of wines declined in the late 1980s, but in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, 【which 指代错误】 was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again (×)
in a 1991 report修饰but后整句,使句意荒谬:在报告里,酒的销量开始上升;
which指代的是red wine,错误(which通常就近指代);
particularly of red wine与moderate alcohol consumption不平行,后者应改为moderate consumption of alcohol;
cause的主语是consumption,逻辑意思很荒谬,正确的主语应该是report。
D. 【Sales】 of wines declined in the late 1980s, but with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular (少了of)red wine, 【they 代词太远】 began growing again (×)
red wine不能同位修饰alcohol consumption,要在red wine前面加上of;
they began growing中的they离其指代对象sales过远。
E. 【Sales】 of wines declined in the late 1980s, but a reduced 【risk 主语错误】of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started 【them指代不清】them growing again (×)
in a 1991 report有修饰moderate alcohol consumption的歧义,好像consumption是发生在report里,还是A 的表达最为明确;
in particular red wine无法修饰alcohol consumption,概念不同;
start的主语是risk错误;start them中的them指代不清。
"逗号后解释的句子一般是前一个句子的从句,所以需要引导词,如果是AB的“on the basis”或“on the grounds”的话是不需要有逗号的。C中副词没有修饰对象。
这句话有点难理解,“相邻的两州建设大型医院是对资源的浪费(完整句子),因为要避免设施的重复建设”。所以造成浪费的是duplication of facilities,设施的重复建设,而不是duplicated facilities。
were not eager应该改成现在完成时have not been,这是因为这件划线部分的事情应该是到现在为止发生的事情,而不是在过去发生的事情
连词since使得It seems that elk would be mountain dwellers和they once ranged over virtually all of the continental United States变成了“因果关系”,但逻辑上“现在Elk像是高山居住者”和“他们曾经在各个地方生存过”是转折关系,应将since改为but。
In English, collective nouns for ethnic groups / families/dynasties / proper names for sports teams, etc, will be plural (unlike other collective nouns):
The Welsh have delightful accents.
The Medici were avid art collectors.
The Heat (basketball team) play in Miami.
So in this sentence, "the Shang" must be plural. Eliminate C.
In E, "and" should connect two verbs. However, "and well known" is a participial modifier. This isn't parallel.
The correct answer is D.
第一,在习语上,“遭受”应该用be not subject to而不是be not subject of;第二,as身后的those that damage collections in the United States是名词短语,这表示as在本选项中是介词。作介词时,as意为:“作为”。在逻辑上,“极端的气温和湿度”本身就是毁坏美国展品的东西,而不必要说“极端的气温和湿度”是“作为”毁坏美国展品的。
it要做形式主语也只能说it took sb some time/money to do sth,也不知道是必须有sb还是必须有to do sth还是都要有
The actual mistake in choice D is the word "arrangement". "Arrangement" doesn't refer to the process of arranging something; it refers to the arrangement that results from that process.
(Similarly, "as I was judging xxxx" makes sense. "During my judgment of xxxxx" doesn't, because a judgment is a conclusion, not the process of arriving at that conclusion.)
看准平行对象,决定有没有to
本题比较重要的一点是能看出选项(A)的这个倒装句来,正常语序为:
a cycle in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC's with more powerful models has begun.
这里的倒装是因为cycle的定语从句实在是太长了,放在句中会使得主干部分被相隔太远,不容易让读者看明白。
as opposed to是“相反”的意思,instead of是“而不是”的意思。在逻辑上,现在330美金的学费和之前的7美金学费应该是“而不是”关系,而没有“相反”的关系。
C.by including伴随状语,在主句中没有合适的逻辑主语,错误。
单独Including(特例,不表示伴随),介词,做定语修饰前面的名词instructions。
A、B,known as/to be在Europe后面是会有歧义的,一种是作伴随省略being,主语是bones;一种是过去分词作定语,修饰Europe
D、E,those重复指代了
C,强调了bones known就很好
recognition
-public respect and thanks for someone’s work or achievements
*in recognition of something
eg:He was presented with a gold watch in recognition of his service to the company.
when placing them with others of their species, then,主语是locust,locust不能主动placing locust
平行
选项A:by far surpass those of pieces中的代词those应该改为that。这是因为,比较对象应该是两种玻璃的一些碎片的质量,而quality是单数名词,应该用that of。
选项E:Correct.本选项在语法和逻辑上均是正确的。not only身后的with regard to和but also后面的in terms of是两个平行的介词短语。请注意,平行要求的并不是介词相同,而是同样都是一个成分。比如,本选项中,not only和but also之间都是介词短语,这就是平行的,而不要求介词严格一样。
需要考虑to do的逻辑主语
media是复数,原型是medium